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Wishing She Was You
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I could argue the point with you ... but every one that has chatted with you knows .. I am hoping that in some small way I have been able to grow and overcome my mistakes and passed the trials of life like you have. tender hugs...m.
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Heavenly, Thanks. A HINT of sadness? It's COVERED with sad! Men think with their penises too much. Myself, included. We miss out on a lot of the good-stuff because of it. That's down-right sad!
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9/22/2006 10:12 am |
I guess you broke the secret oath now, buddy! All these women are gonna know for sure now, we just basically ain't NO DAMN GOOD!!! lmao I think they kinda had a notion before anyway. But it was a good piece and now I gotta go somewhere and feel guilty for a while or maybe do a good deed of some kind for pentance. Know anybody got a kitten stuck in a tree or and woman that needs a hole dug or something??? kpb PS: You asked me on my blog if I mad at you about something. I can't think of a reason why. I have been really busy lately and just not making the rounds well. I'll try to do better tomorrow. lol
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you always try to say you are a bad boy... I get such a wonderful feeling knowing how modest you are and how caring you really are.... even if it is now. I read those poems and think you need a hug and to know we all go through trials, it is something we must all do eventually.... and you have definitely changed... I see such understanding and truth and tenderness and most of all your recognizing the regrets of the past. The woman that finally convinces you to let her into your heart will be a winner... Thank you for the poems.... you understand the inner most feelings I have and it is astounding ...touching.... I hope you have a wonderful weekend ... tender hugs...m.
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It's a brilliant and deeply moving poem, straight from the heart. It deeply questions the "better to have loved and lost" premise and portrays that subcurrent of regret. As a poem it has a deep sincerity which really gives it quality. As a colouring experience it does have more than a touch of that "looking back" trait that men our age have, and with matters of the heart a deep sadness. When you're young you hardly ever look in the rear mirror, with all those consequences. Sometimes when we're older we look at it a tad too much, when there is still quite a lot of road ahead. ~warm
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Mo, Yeah, when I'm not writing goofy/funny stuff, I tend to write feelings. And they're not always nice.
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Flyaway, Thank you. How sweet!
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Huny, Thanks, babe. Believe me, you don't want a crush on this mess. I'm weird.
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9/20/2006 9:16 pm |
This is beautiful...  - DT
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applauding you for doing your work now with the feelings that have come up inside of you... that is all any of us can do... and every one does in their own way and in their own time.. gotta feel it to heal it... understanding... and appreciating the poem...  Just a little food for thought............. If you really want to be happy, nobody can stop you... {=}
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you know I love ya... but besides that you sexy dog.... I love ya... I know you put more than words into those tender poems. Your heart and soul and still there is room for more... tender hugs and back rubs.... kisses ...m.
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Purple, Thanks. It really does.
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Very nice poem.....I can see why it drains you. The emotions pulled from us for some writing definitely does that....take care!  Pull My Fucking Hair! 
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Shy, Thank you. I'm feeling better, today.
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Waggypolly, Thanks. Very bitter-sweet. What a chore, mentally! I really prefer to be goofy.
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Curious, Thanks. I AM feeling a little better today. Not quite so bad. And your welcome, Honey.
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Be well and take care...*smiles*
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9/20/2006 2:44 am |
Love the fact you show your heart in your poetry. I know everyone says the worse things when they are caught doing something bad.. human nature.. nice to see that those that 'sin' also 'repent' so I leave you with your own quote... ""Maybe, "Thanks.....Asshole!", would be a more appropriate thought."" J
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Lustybaby, They were ALL long ago. We're talking 20+ years here. My ex-wife WASN'T one of them. She was one I SHOULDN'T have given my all to. I pick the bad ones, alright. Even HER parents still think I'm GOLDEN, and take me out to dinner of and on. I really DID treat her well, and never hurt her or cheated. But it was from 18 to 40 yrs old that I really fucked up. There IS no one now. I don't date, and I don't even know any single women. I'm not sure that you realize how isolated I am. Except for one set of friends [ a couple ], and my brother [ and his family ], I see no one. THAT, is my total involvement with people, except for work. And no pep talks, ok? I'll get over this soon.
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mm, My dear, sweet, Margaret. There ARE no steamy facts. I just FELT those women's stories. I know I've hurt plenty in my past. I didn't MEAN to, but I did, never-the-less. I've always keep myself in check. I'd go *so* far, and no further. If they got too close, I'd run. I'd tell them in the beginning, NO COMMITMENTS, but then I'd just use them until they gave up. How nice is THAT? Was I honest about it? You BET! But so what? Big deal! It sure didn't make THEM any happier! I only gave all to a very few. Vey few. And SO many were worth more than that. I think that you think that something NEW happened. Not so. Just going through old memories, that's all.
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Kitten, Thanks. Those bloggers just got to me. They were hurting SO bad.
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Cozy, Thank you. This wasn't fun.
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9/19/2006 9:40 pm |
GAP---you gotta know that once again you've touched me and, as I'm sure you know, I can feel this poem. Maybe you should reach out to one of those you should have hung on to? Sometimes love just has such a wonderful ending And I'm not one to usually overlook mistakes, but I also believe there are some things that are beyond earthly comprehension, some things that are meant to be. Maybe you have someone in yourlife that was meant to be?
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Oh.... I see... another two days lost for reasons unknown.... no explanation is needed... we didnt want to know anyway,Darlin... Just stay safe... rest if you can However if you need to unwind ..... be sure to keep your blog friends in mind and fill us in on all the steamy facts later!!!  tender hugs.... your dearest friend  .....m.
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Stormy, There were definately some that I should have hung on to. Tight. I'm just tired. If you come back, read this. [post 365883]
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